The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how
people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe
that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations
for modern life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
There are various people who think about how to behave young generations in this century. . I partly agree that a number of ancestoral ideas are outdated but there are several useful notions help youngers living in modern life.
On the one hand, it can be true that some people especially aged believe that humans should conduct their children with traditional views since they contribute to our culture. For instance, older people always might teach their children to be helpful to others who are dependent. By this way we can save our customs in order to bring to future generations. In addition,elderlies have been telling us not to be arbitrary and to consult with them in every field we do. At the same time,in the past, almost everyone lived according to the wishes of their parents, that is, they had almost no rights in matters such as marriage, career choice, education.
On the other hand, in these days it is hard to live with old-fashioned ideas as some of them are not available for today's life. Giving an example, now most of adults are becoming more independent and they can achieve some goals one's own. In comparision, they can make their life easy as well as how they want rather then in the past. Many individuals married eraly before defenetly by convention and it could be caused numerous bad results. But now it is more common to marry at the age that who want.
To conclude, all of traditional ideas can not be accessible in modern life while some of them might be helpful for new generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72932330827 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58874930638 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3032077097 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7692307692 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270287242654 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891115720239 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084735343282 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185456145197 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101043593195 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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