It has been argued that people dedicate their whole lives to their work to make money. Although money is the primary element behind hard work, I believe other factors including passion and a desire to contribute to society also motivate hard work.
It is understandable why many individuals argue that money has been the predominant factor behind their hard work. First, employees need money to meet their basic necessities, such as buying food or paying bills. Due to the fierce competition in current job markets, some decide to work overtime or have two jobs at the same time in order to make ends meet and maintain living standards. Furthermore, many individuals derive great pleasure from material wealth. Having a decent income can translate into a prosperous life with luxurious accommodations and high-end cars, which brings a sense of satisfaction.
However, I believe those who work hard because of a natural enthusiasm as well as a desire to help others. Many artists, for example, are willing to work in a gallery all day long to sketch, paint, and perfect their paintings. They would like to create impressive works of self-expression rather than maximize the cost of selling their artworks. Another reason that encourages hard work is a desire to contribute to society. Numerous firefighters, in fact, are willing to risk their lives to rescue others, which means money is not their main motivation, and an altruistic wish to help others far exceeds other causes.
In conclusion, although money is of course a driving force behind hard work, I believe people are likely to achieve a greater sense of satisfaction when they consider other factors besides simply salary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...rst, employees need money to meet their basic necessities, such as buying food or paying bills. D...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11594202899 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76226713457 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5324782015 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196354979216 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766726730333 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577564951461 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13434965803 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454364125939 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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