While a few years ago, individuals were incapable of living abroad, in recent times being a resident of a plethora of district places is the norm. This happens mainly because of the people’s belief that they are citizens of the world, and we should see this as a beneficial development for the reasons explained below.
Firstly, in comparison with the past centuries, nowadays people feel like citizens of the world, because of globalization. By listening to the same music, dressing in a similar way and following mutual eating habits, individuals can communicate and understand each other’s lifestyles even though they live in the other part of Earth. In other words, globalization has affected the recent lifestyle in all its aspects, and therefore, citizens of one country can easily migrate to another without feeling rejected, like probably felt in the past. For instance, it is not anymore considered as a negative transposition on your job, if your manager decides to send you work in another country, where the company operates branches.
The aforementioned development has a huge positive impact on people’s lives both psychologically and practically. On the one hand, being a resident of a different country is no longer a difficult and unadoptable task, while individuals will probably never feel depressed when sharing the same ideas. Of course, there are a lot of differences between cultures, but they are all known and respected nowadays, since there is no scarcity of information related to them. On the other hand, migrating in big cities, for example in metropolis, gives individuals’ the opportunity to work with better salaries or open new departments of their firms, which were unfeasible in the past.
In conclusion, living in different countries of the world is a common thing nowadays, because of globalization and its effects on people’s mindset. Thus, it should be seen as a positive development because of the opportunities people can face.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27129337539 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08385720212 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583596214511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.5440482042 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.25 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300933273925 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09845085815 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533137202714 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178138680913 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484670014035 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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