In the past people used to wear their traditional clothes depending on their culture. Nowadays the trend is changing and people wear different clothes. Is it a positive or negative development? How does it affect certain societies and people’s behavior

There is a famous saying change is the only constant. One must embrace change with happiness. In today’s time people love their freedom and always like to express themselves by trying out something different. This can be by wearing different clothes, trying a new hobby, etc. In this essay, we will discuss the benefits of the same.
Traditional clothes are designed by our ancestors. They represent the culture and heritage of that society. People can easily identify by the clothes that they belong to a certain society. But with rapid globalization, these clothes tend to be a barrier between two persons in the society. Apart from this wearing traditional clothes is not feasible every day. These clothes though can be worn on some traditional function to get the authentic look and break the monotonous nature of wearing normal clothes every day. For example, Traditional clothes go well on occasions like Diwali where every person shares a sense of pride by showcasing their cultures and traditions.

Another important aspect when people wear normal clothes like shirts and jeans across all regions there is a sense of openness among people irrespective of caste and creed. This altogether helps people to interact and thus making a world a better place. Though you cannot force people to wear it is always helpful. Offices encourage people to wear smart casuals so that people don’t feel hostile. To illustrate an example Wearing a smart casual brings a sense of equality among colleagues in the office.

To conclude Wearing clothes can be a personal choice and you cannot enforce upon someone to wear certain clothes but you can always wear smart casuals every day but wearing traditional dress on a special occasion can add a flavor of heritage and culture.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and thus making a world a better place. Though you cannot force people to wear it is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, thus, well, apart from, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09556313993 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58977134723 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7940746657 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9444444444 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337033951483 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100963767053 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675277989863 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19990179083 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439213510681 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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