In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience.
Studying a university in our hometown was a popular trend in the past. However, the number of students who chose to study outside their own country is still increasing. The important question is of abroad study if beneficial or it is not worth the effort.
There is a lot to be said for developing new and attractive opportunities for foreign students. Firstly, universities are gaining and maintaining their prestige along with drawing attention to the local tourist attractions and culture, and therefore improving financial status of the country. Secondly, students are able to become independent and to settle down without parent's help and this contributes to enhance on traits and gain useful skills. Furthermore, potential graduates who live and study abroad are able to master their language and hence have more opportunities in job hunt. Finally, encountering local citizens helps to be more confident in communication and acquiring new connections among people which can be also profitable in the future.
However, the issue of studying in higher education out of one's hometown has some disadvantages. For students it is very mentally demanding to be surrounded by wholy new people, speak fluently in foreign language and also be forced to learn massive bulk of information in other language than their mother tongue. Moreover, they do not have a financial or mental support from their family and former freinds so they have to find their feet and stay strong. I don't see any particular drawback for the university or country pertaining economical or other status.
To conclude, developing new opportunities for students who aim to study abroad pays off for universities as well as for potential students. I believe that there will be more possibilities to expand one's knowledge in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24827586207 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97088527785 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6375325702 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268518661914 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878417703189 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526875044265 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166896166505 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400726232979 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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