In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
In recent years, the world has become a smaller place. Formerly, the preceding generations were limited to gain a university degree in their home county, but, nowadays, the millennial generations are no longer confined to seek knowledge in their countries. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from studying abroad.
To begin with the positives, one of the primary advantages is that overseas students may have the opportunity to unlock their brains’ potential. This is because of the exposure to various cultured people, who speak a different language so that overseas students are more likely to learn a new language in order to communicate with the locals. For example, London, in which citizens speak English, has prestigious seats of learning and thus overseas students have to learn English to interact with the English people. Moreover, by studying abroad, overseas students will most probably become self-sufficient due to the independent lifestyle they experience in a foreign country.
Nevertheless, notwithstanding the metis of studying abroad, the demerits cannot be overlooked. When students tend to secure a place at venerable university abroad, they incline to reside there owing to better jobs opportunities, and this not only leads to brain drain but also contributes to adopting intellectual giftedness. A good illustration of this is Ahmed Zwell. He was born in Egypt but he studied abroad in the USA and became an American citizen. Furthermore, by virtue of studying abroad, overseas students will bear a financial burden.
In conclusion, while studying abroad has undoubted upsides, of which widening students’ horizons is the most apparent, it has serious repercussion, most notably is a higher cost of living.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49818181818 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0677118832 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4973024101 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323958911238 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983679143776 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532098759648 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165538690886 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612998588753 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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