In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Formerly, preceding generations were confined to seek knowledge in their home country, but, at this contemporary times, the millennials can study overseas readily, as the world now become a smaller place. This essay will highlight both the merits and demerits that result from studying abroad.
To begin with the positives, there are salient features if the undergraduates have a predilection for studying overseas. Multiculturalism exposure seems to be one of the primary benefits of this paradigm shift, which conduces to learn a new language. Therefore, by virtue of studying abroad, overseas scholars will most probably expand their horizons. For example, when the undergraduates from the Middle East endeavour to study at a prestigious university in the United States, they have to learn English in order to communicate with local citizens. Moreover, independence tends to be a result of this quantum leap. This is because students strive to cope with the vicissitudes of life solely. As a result, not only will overseas students gain autonomy, but they will also take on the mantle of their lives.
Nevertheless, albeit the advantageous implication of studying abroad, the repercussions cannot be overlooked. By studying abroad, intellectual giftedness will be adopted, thereby inducing brain drain. A good illustration of this is Ahmed Zewail, of whom his nationality is an Egyptian. When he was, he studied in the United States, so that he became an American due to his academic prowess and personal aptitude. Furthermore, if scholars have the inclination to study abroad, they will bear a financial burden as they have to afford the higher cost of tuition fees and accommodation.
In conclusion, while studying abroad has undoubted advantages, of which unlocking brain’s potential is the most apparent, it has obvious drawbacks, most notably is the brunt of the admission.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44745762712 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12233385261 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6315284674 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325052277225 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100934143852 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496622856261 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174944512129 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701500956732 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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