People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Many young people espacially teenagers are going more passionate about either experiancing, healing or simulation of others like parents regarding any type of drugs taking wheather it is legal or illegal.
A lot of reasons could be resbonsible for these acts that young teenagers are doing these days, one of them is the passion to try new prohibeted things, maybe to figure out why it is so or just to discover new methods for amusement, that this comes in concidence with the large spread of the drugs both legally and illegaly. another potential cause might be that the life diffculties are being more intensivly greater reaching in its levels and types to younger ages making them wanting to heal from a depression or releasing a certain pressure. when an additional big problem just arose lately which is about parents and adults being involved in these actions in front of teenagers.
In my opinion, I see that the best way to get rid of this disaster is to fight the sources from where ilegal drugs are coming from in a proffesional way ,in other words the methods followed these days in damping them are useless reffering to the everyday seen results and should be enhanced a way further. while the most handy effictive method is to increase public awarness and more specificly the youth population via either one of those: TV show programs, medical warning and the most powerful tool; the stress reduction in the modern lifestyles and heavy job duties.
To sum up, it is so easy to stop the experimenting these drugs by young poeple when focusing on how to follow sources of propagation effictively which is the first important cause of this, and also by living in an stress-free that requieres no heal from a pressure or emotional problems which are the second cause for drug increacing usage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, while, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86129032258 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60877611135 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9342419144 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 215.285714286 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.2857142857 20.7667163134 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152343125389 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669066920757 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326129926411 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938028912517 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241421009161 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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