It is argued whether people can come up with an ideal society or this is unflappable. I believe that a human society cannot be idealized. However, I opine that we have the credentials to make our society ideal.
From ancient times until today, people dreamed of living in an ideal society, and many dealt with this concept, especially philosophers. For example, Plato, an ancient Green philosopher, engaged in the characteristics of a perfect society; he discussed such a civilization in his best-known work, Republic. The latter has inspired a lot of people since then, including me, to talk about an ideal city-state. In my opinion, a utopian city is consisted of justice and good governance. However, both justice and satisfactory governance could not be achieved through the current conditions and regimes. Injustice, which is the norm in developed countries, results in unhappy men, and the regimes which do not encourage our personality and attitudes lead to unsatisfied persons. Consequently, an ideal society could be designed only with radical changes, which are not achievable nowadays because of biases and prejudices related to the meaning of important notions, like justice.
Even if I believe that an ideal society cannot be created, I think that we could end up with such a city-state only by the means of education. Educated people are concerned about the majority of the crucial sides of our society, such as politics and political science, financial stability and the relationships between the states. These issues are related to the fundamental meaning of the ideal society, as it was described above. Thus, being informed about them, or even having the qualifications to be informed is rather important for the creation of an ideal society. The development of education is the key to make a perfect society, although governments and decision-makers do not recognize it, while they invest more in
purchases of weapons for the military.
To sum up, in my opinion, the utopian society is difficult to be achieved, although we have the references to create it through education.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21238938053 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01915062396 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551622418879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3861470468 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372578253623 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122859504409 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968614448222 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198001037994 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127941262109 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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