People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, shopping has been accounted as one of the most popular routines among people. Some people have a conviction that age play a prominent role regarding determination of shopping preferences. I will elaborate in this essay why I am a strong advocate of this statement.
First and foremost, there is no doubt that maturity is an undeniable characteristic of getting older. It would be approximately hard for youngsters and teenagers to prioritize their needs which ends to buy whatever they want. For example, many of us have adolescents in our family that purchase DVDs of different games without thinking whether they have used the previous ones or not. Moreover, people after 30s start having their own lifestyle which means they do not to try every single thing they see. For instance, I wear more formal dress rather, so there is no need to cost significant amount of money to acquire snickers or backpack.
Another vital fact which should be taken into consideration is that financial status of people can make a difference in their way of living and particularly for their shopping habits. People belong to average income bracket could have afford go to the shopping centers more frequently or buy more fancy stuffs, if they would have earned more money. Furthermore, people communicate with others who are in a same revenue and they adapt themselves to specific activities. I remember when I promoted last year and my salary remarkably was increased, I would rather to go with my friends who can accompany me in more luxury shopping centers.
On the basis of the point mentioned above, although various factor can have an effect on the purchasing favorites in people, aged is the most effective ones since even the most influential feature, such as financial situation can be changed by growing up.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'afforded'.
Suggestion: afforded
...ng to average income bracket could have afford go to the shopping centers more frequen...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to go'
Suggestion: to go
...verage income bracket could have afford go to the shopping centers more frequently...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had earned'?
Suggestion: had earned
...ently or buy more fancy stuffs, if they would have earned more money. Furthermore, people communi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03642384106 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78891502479 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658940397351 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7767931697 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178630419888 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589585614977 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501289109826 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950005154164 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482379475407 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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