Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
"Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up."
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past, it was a common custom that the one who was responsible to bring up children - was the mother only; the fathers' responsibility was to earn the livings and provide a good life. However, a change in the belief took place in the previous few years; nowadays, some people claim that fatherhood should be emphasized much more. Although some people see that fathers must contribute in the bringing up of children and it's not only mother's responsibility, other people still see that it's only mother's responsibility.
Firstly, the majority of humans thinks is just mother responsibility to grow up a child. Also, they did not believe that a kid was made with a man. For example, when we see a woman which had an amorous relationship with a guy and after first date she become pregnant is obvious her fault and she must be conscious about what she did. Also, that guy must stay with that women because she did not bears a child alone.
Secondly, a respectable female always has a word to say when is about the responsibility of bringing the children up. A child does not appear from anywhere, so it happen because some people want a kid or not, depends on the situation. Couples who want children are expected at that and they will prepare good condition for growing up a child, but mothers in generally work harder than fathers when we speak about raising a kid. For instance, mother usually helps more a child to learn or to speak and a father teach a kid to walk or to ride a bike.
In conclusion, I believe that couples must take care of their kids even if they didn`t anticipated that. Moreover, a child doesn't grow up alone, so parents must teach them in order to become great men. I think a mother can teach a child how to communicate and a father must be oriented to teach a kid how to improve physical skills
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'fathers'' or 'father's'?
Suggestion: fathers'; father's
... up children - was the mother only; the fathers responsibility was to earn the livings ...
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Line 4, column 397, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'bear'
Suggestion: bear
...tay with that women because she did not bears a child alone. Secondly, a respecta...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 164, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...ld does not appear from anywhere, so it happen because some people want a kid or not, ...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s;t anticipated that. Moreover, a child doesnt grow up alone, so parents must teach th...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 337, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ach a kid how to improve physical skills
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209809264305 0.247107183377 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.179836512262 0.155533422707 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0435967302452 0.0946595960268 46% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0735694822888 0.0501214627716 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0490463215259 0.0437548338989 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111716621253 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0217983651226 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62230237279 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0326975476839 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00817438692098 0.00163938923432 499% => OK
Determiners: 0.114441416894 0.0861772015684 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245231607629 0.021408717616 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0245231607629 0.011925033212 206% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1844.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 332.0 316.048096192 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55421686747 6.12580529183 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.28313253012 0.374742101984 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.189759036145 0.28420135186 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.120481927711 0.203846283523 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0722891566265 0.137316102897 53% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62230237279 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539156626506 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 57.4058818416 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7142857143 20.7743622355 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4816887323 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7743622355 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 0.814263465372 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 42.6901893287 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.13513513514 1.69124875643 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270519606812 0.332605444948 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0962443788591 0.102741220458 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0757850369469 0.0668466124924 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526341410349 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113192900111 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105786707813 0.134430193775 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562616587661 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.216577752411 0.324371583561 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0324160734724 0.0638462369009 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172746285957 0.228012699653 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382770210923 0.058150111329 66% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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