By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, according to the severeness of the crime, murderers will be sentenced with a proper punishment; and death penalty is considered to be the heaviest among all type of sentences. I am mainly disagree that life in prison should be the best punishment for the most inhumane criminals. The notion might be true to some extent, in terms of the pain dealth penalty may leaves, but death penalty should not be made illegal for the murders' threat to the society and the expediture government might have to spend on prisons.
Life in prison appears to be the alternative choice for criminals who have taken part in serious murder. This tyoe of punishment are seemingly more humane when it comes to human rights. It has been argued that killing a human being, legally of illeagally, is still a crime that should not be forgiven, for the agony it leaves to the victims and their families. For example, a mother with a son as a serial killer should not confront any deeper pain seeing her offspring being sentenced to death, because her son's cruelty is already the hardest experience of her life.
However, due to the danger of some murderers, life imprisonment is not the most appropriate way to punish them. Commiting the most severe crimes means that criminals have already lost their conscience and sanity. All the pain and agony they have left just to satisfy their endless desire of killing humans should, indeed, not be neglected. If those people are not to be sentenced to death, then the victims are still exposed to worry and terror.
Another reason for legalizing death penalty is the expenses which the authorities might face in order to ensure those murderers' lives in prison. A large number of criminals are homeless people, and living a life in prison with adequate meals everyday seems to be a reward, rather than punishment, as spending the rest of their lives there also means thay no longer have to struggle with finding places to stay, earning profits to make a living. The government, instead, is the one to pay for those unnecessay expenses, which should be saved for more meaningful activities, for instance boosting the economy of enhancing the education system.
In conclusion, although life in prison is a good punishment, government should also take death panalty into account when judging a crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
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Suggestion: Many; Numerous
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91392405063 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55851563279 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546835443038 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9561041981 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234040298198 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824726915033 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464744694534 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1322760577 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041930732649 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.