With the rapid development of communication technology, e.g. smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the abundance of portable communication technology these days, there has been a lot of discussion that mobile phones, tablets and other devices are producing more issues than benefits to society. I completely disagree with this opinion, as I believe that mobile devices have served more advantages that outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, the proliferation of social media and teleconferencing tools have drastically improved long distances communication. With a few clicks of a button, speaking to people in other countries via portable devices is now possible. For instance, mobile phones and tablets have enables popular applications like Skype to be used these days to connect face-to-face virtually friends, family or business partners, no matter if next door or in Europe. With the we socialize these days, there is no doubt how beneficial communication technology has been.
On the other hand, the development of antisocial behavior has arisen from the revolution of technology. Our increased reliance on mobile devices is changing the way we communicate – from spending quality time together connecting instantaneously. For example, applications only specific to mobile phones and tablets like Instagram and WhatsApp have fostered habits like cyberbullying and social detachment especially amongst teenagers. It is these disadvantages that are causing people to feel that it has outweighed the benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 462, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'we'?
Suggestion: the; we
... matter if next door or in Europe. With the we socialize these days, there is no doubt...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66511627907 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2290126114 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1379876121 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.8 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223074587625 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886295888525 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529847365729 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156766768493 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508780137203 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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