Reading is the best way to improve imagination. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Imagination is an individual facility to be different.Some people believe that books are the most effective way to progress it but I completely disagree with this statement that I think there are other keys to foster our cognitive thinking.
Reading books and telling stories to children can nurture their imaginative thoughts however, it is not the only way. Directing the young to the artistic skills including drawing, dancing, singing, and playing roles on stages is alternative sources to encourage them to express their creative ideas. For instance, at schools, in drawing lesson, pupils have to create an art depending on their images in their mind presenting their insights colourfully to the reality. To my mind, books as well as these artful subjects pursuit children to be open up the world.
Even, imagination is a diverse personal identity, it is a human capacity meaning all people have a productive imaginative ability and it can be flourished variously such as playing indoor or outdoor games or having only a walk in nature since people can be inspired consciously according to their tastes, unconsciously with the object surrounde. Taking inventors as an example,Newton, a famous scientist, he invented the Earth graduation suddenly while he was having a rest under an apple tree. He proved his ideas transmitting them into the materials. I think, this can be an obvious example to develope imagination excluding books.
In conclusion, this essay argues about reading books is the most effective tool to improve images in children's minds yet I do not completely agree with this sentence as I believe there are equivalents improvement of imagination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25746268657 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98183359501 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630597014925 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.2851127153 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.9 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133925223619 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504424305125 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613363124889 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903177164778 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489867910315 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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