With the recent development in technology like e books, some people feel that printed materials like books, newspapers and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear.
What is your opinion?
Advancement in technology affected communication tools in various ways. Although some people believe that the printed materials will become obsolete, I would argue that it is still indispensable.
To begin with, information on the offline media such as books and newspapers come from a reliable source. All the data gathered by a professional reporter were verified and edited for authenticity and correctness. For instance, a research done by an independent international press club in the UK claimed that the Times Newspaper has the highest reliability ratings compared to other online site news. Thus, this clearly shows that people will trust to read published news in printed form because of its accuracy in giving the right information.
Furthermore, the limitation of internet connection in some places causes the people to rely on a published materials. Most of the residents in remote towns and provinces find it particularly difficult to have a high-speed internet access. For example, in a survey conducted by the National Telecommunication Commission in the Philippines, it revealed that only 60% of the citizens enjoyed the required connectivity from various internet companies. This makes it clear that the issue in connectivity prohibits the total disappearance of the published media.
In conclusion, while the advancement of technology has an impact on the forms of communication, I believe that offline media is an essential part of communication needed by the society. It is predicted that in the future this printed materials will continue to be the most popular choice among the readers because of reliability and internet issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'material'?
Suggestion: material
...auses the people to rely on a published materials. Most of the residents in remote towns ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26523297491 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.139784946237 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10394265233 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0215053763441 0.0501214627716 43% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0286738351254 0.0437548338989 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.172043010753 0.122226691241 141% => OK
Participles: 0.0465949820789 0.0403226058552 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.23663378697 2.80594681477 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215053763441 0.0326793684256 66% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132616487455 0.0861772015684 154% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143369175627 0.021408717616 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1658.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 257.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.4513618677 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4046692607 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.338521400778 0.28420135186 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.260700389105 0.203846283523 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.182879377432 0.137316102897 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23663378697 2.80594681477 115% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 60.6345611818 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4166666667 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.383795314 49.517814964 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.166666667 127.492653851 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 55.2688067445 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 2.54716981132 1.69124875643 151% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382113653163 0.332605444948 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118173004108 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.070969757561 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.61432408507 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12273193237 0.148594505496 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174905767688 0.134430193775 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067831064649 0.0742795772207 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380465925274 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.150156265026 0.0638462369009 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275274028341 0.228012699653 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038069821637 0.058150111329 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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