Recent research has shown that media like the Internet and TV have a greater influence over people’s lives than politicians.
Which do you consider to be the greater influence?
Unlike the past, these days people’s lives has been alter in a quick rate in every society, Either in developing counties or developed ones. The question is, however, whether media have influential impacts on our lives or politician. Despite popular belief, I am, to a huge extent, an advocate of the former position.
Granted, media, from a practical viewpoint, play a vital role in every individual’s life. First and foremost media is the most attractive option for people in order to pastime. As a classification, I would contend that thanks to high-tech technology which is entail of smart phone, laptop and etc., people can be access a vast number of applications. These application ranging from social applications to websites which give them a great chance not only can you link with a huge amount of information which is related to global events even in faraway countries but also you can be discuss about it with numerous people and express your idea as well. Further and most importantly, there is another thing which come through our mind in first glance, is about long-distance relationship with people who live in other nations with different culture and norms. Thus, it either positively or negatively affect our life. Also, some application, the salient example is Instagram, directly impact on people’s mind and it triggers cultural assimilation in a number of cases. As we can clearly see, most people try to follow the global trend in a variety of subject such as clothing, music, business and so on.
On the other hand, nevertheless, most of politician have several effect on people’s life by decisions that they take on a number of situation. Firstly, government set regulation on different subjects. So, it is limited people freedom in number of actions. Another exquisite point is about economic forces they make on people by setting the price on products and job opportunities. Hence there is no doubt that we never can ignore the impacts of politician from our life.
All things considered, although states have a crucial role on our lives, I wholeheartedly reaffirm that has the most influence on our life in different stages, particularly in terms of information sources and social contact.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'altered'.
Suggestion: altered
...these days people's lives has been alter in a quick rate in every society, Eithe...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'entailed'.
Suggestion: entailed
...thanks to high-tech technology which is entail of smart phone, laptop and etc., people...
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Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... which is entail of smart phone, laptop and etc., people can be access a vast number of ...
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Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this application' or 'These applications'?
Suggestion: This application; These applications
...e access a vast number of applications. These application ranging from social applications to web...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rice on products and job opportunities. Hence there is no doubt that we never can ign...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, another thing, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12568306011 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98267064326 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592896174863 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4990276475 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.352941176 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161928765496 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467978134181 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318098796639 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890997468698 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301598383117 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.