Essay topics:
reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
while some people believe that the authorities have a vital role to play in minimizing global environmental hazards are more than what citizens can do. To a certain extent I agree that the states have a great deal of effort, however, I also believe that the damage to the environment ought to be solved by putting emphasis on individuals' attempt.
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reducing
reducing global environmental damage should be h...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...by governments rather than individuals. to what extent do you agree or disagree? ...
^^
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o what extent do you agree or disagree? while some people believe that the authoritie...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... what extent do you agree or disagree? while some people believe that the authoritie...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 405.0 1615.20841683 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 80.0 315.596192385 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.99069756244 4.20363070211 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9556883716 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 57.0 176.041082164 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7125 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 133.2 506.74238477 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1221773508 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.598097642926 0.244688304435 244% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.361333230982 0.084324248473 429% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.233081001117 0.0667982634062 349% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.603537160529 0.151304729494 399% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.396462839471 0.056905535591 697% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.