Essay topics:
reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
while some people believe that the authorities have a vital role to play in minimizing global environmental hazards are more than what citizens can do. To a certain extent I agree that the states have a great deal of effort, however, I also believe that the damage to the environment ought to be solved by putting emphasis on individuals' attempt.
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
while some people believe that the authoritie...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
while some people believe that the authoritie...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 41.998997996 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 287.0 1615.20841683 18% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 60.0 315.596192385 19% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78333333333 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.78315768371 4.20363070211 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77543790339 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 47.0 176.041082164 27% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.783333333333 0.561755894193 139% => OK
syllable_count: 97.2 506.74238477 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 21.5 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207074321059 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143181707147 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0201334074924 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207074321059 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 78.4519038076 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.