Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of
pollution. Some people believe the government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the
fault of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Pollution is mainly caused by product transportation and people . Therefore, there is a controversy between whether the government or only individuals may take the main responsibility for this problem. This essay will discuss both views and give the personal opinion for this issue.
Regarding the government, there are certain reasons why the governme nt need to be in charge of pollution. First of all, government have the power to make and strengthen laws. Consequently, this will give the government the right to observe and force people to protect the environment. For example, the government can charge a higher tax on midsize and large displacement vehicles to restrict the number of those vehicles on the road, which indirectly reduces a large amount of exhaust fumes released into the air. Secondly, governments have an extensive influence on the public, which enables them to organize many environmental-related activities or campaigns to raise awareness in the community. Howeve r, those actions still need the collaboration from people to achieve the purpose successfully.
On the other hand, individuals can be responsible for the polluted environment. It is believed that people nowadays use lots of transportation and discharge pollutants into the environment continuously. Because of that, people can directly reduce pollution by adjusting their daily habits, such as saving water and electricity, using public transportation instead of private cars,... A small change from one person can easily impact others, which may in turn create a big difference on improving the pollution level. In other words, the awareness of protecting the environment can be raised quicker and more effectively between individuals than by the government.
In conclusion, although the government has certain rights to adjust public behaviors by laws and many campaigns, I personally believe that individuals may take the main faults for pollution as their living habits directly affect the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60655737705 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21577926429 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.918292093 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324646848423 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111287175664 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809725195605 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196314308573 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784866444128 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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