Same people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading use to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no pay attention to it
In this expeditiously evolving world number of people think that advertising is important for business. so I amagreement that. businessmen should be pay more for expeditiously. Furthermore It is seen bring the effective for them business.
Many doctors want to see a law banning all tobacco advertising.As marketing manager, his job is to oversee all the company’s advertising.So otherside important occupation workers sympathizer advertise, moreover nowadays much people earn money from the ones. Internet marketing is developing day by day, it is easier side for make money, furthermore regarding marketing is comfortable, easy and reduce of time
I am in broad agreement with these. On the other hand, advertisement might be lose its power, because peopleexposed commercials consistly and this caused ignoring any kind of sale tactics. For instance, if people see many commercials in an online streaming platform, they cancel their memberships because they find the commercial sirritating. This shows that maybe, marketing skills must be changed.
In conclusion, advertisement might divide the society whether it is related to the today's world. In my opinion, its success outweigh the people's attention to it. People might decide with their experiences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: So
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...n should be pay more for expeditiously. Furthermore It is seen bring the effective for the...
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...e a law banning all tobacco advertising.As marketing manager, his job is to overse...
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Suggestion: So
...o oversee all the company’s advertising.So otherside important occupation workers ...
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Suggestion: many
...ympathizer advertise, moreover nowadays much people earn money from the ones. Intern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74736842105 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54419661417 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705263157895 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.3306814471 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2727272727 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173930763388 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681118113719 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528327200427 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106980987011 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545950762676 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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