Traditional courses are excessively taught to student during school's time, so according to some, teaching more crafts and skills, which lead students to find their vocational labor in future, should be considered priority in schools' curriculum. In my opinion, I agree that practical lessons ought to learn rather than traditional one as it will greatly benefit both individuals and society.
A good reason to held feasible courses in schools is giving enough self esteem and confidence to students as they can learn doing special vocations which are important and necessary to find a convenient job in future. At present, graduations even, who have always got high score in all courses, cannot find their favorite job immediately after finish their school while I have seen children who have participated extra classes such as playing musical instruments or mechanical classes, not only will be successful in future but also they can work beside their schools' program and earn money, so they can fell better about themselves which can help them to progress quickly in each stage of their life. Consequently they can strongly deal with problems and obstacles which might be encountered during the job. As a result if schools abolish traditional lessons and allocate more time for skills, more students will life successfully.
An other point to consider is that learning practical major and getting expert in one career are truly effective for society in long run, because most of people in society work in desirable occupation which are good at. In other worlds as every one fulfill their responsibility by enough passionate and knowledge, each labor is done greatly. It helps not only society improve rightly but also culture of country and behavior of people are modified so it leads the world to convert the better place where the quality of life is high whit community's consent.
In conclusion, spending more time for learning skills causes each person find their talent and future career with enough confidence also in long time the society will be modified by expert employee.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...students to find their vocational labor in future, should be considered priority in schoo...
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...onfidence to students as they can learn doing special vocations which are important a...
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... and necessary to find a convenient job in future. At present, graduations even, who have...
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...ss quickly in each stage of their life. Consequently they can strongly deal with problems an...
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...ore students will life successfully. An other point to consider is that learning prac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18289085546 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61702961169 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581120943953 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.123275743 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.7 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273387058443 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104582112127 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813524126788 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163510928719 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817310179385 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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