Scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people think the development have a positive impact others think it is negative To what extend do you agree or disagree
The advancement of technology in the last decade has provided computers the capability to think like humans. As a consequence, a debate has raised whether it would thrive human civilization even further or bring disaster instead. Although smart computers would probably bring some negative effects, I believe the benefits would overweigh the drawbacks.
An expert system in medical field has helped many doctors to make a diagnose based on symptoms. This intelligent system is built by feeding thousands of knowledge on diseases and the symptoms for each of them. With the help of such system, doctors only need to decide which disease is most likely responsible for the patient's suffering from the list of possible illnesses made by the system. For instance, my family doctor has recently tried an expert system and she claimed that the system was very convenient, helpful, and can make an accurate deduction from the given symptoms.
Artificial intelligence on computers has also been utilized by the government to increase security in many ways. One approach is by implementing face recognition technology in public places. For example, a CCTV in airport can help the staffs to recognize criminals that try to enter the airport. The camera then will send the footage to a computer operated by an authorized person to alert them. This kind of system undoubtedly would increase public safety in airports.
In conclusion, smart computers unavoidably would have negative impacts, but it would also help to develop countries and societies as a whole. It is human's responsibility to make regulations to control the usage of computers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26335877863 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86103010638 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614503816794 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.347964476 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105948402612 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373128105113 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400685587277 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740972821186 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470046993723 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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