Scientists believe that by studying behaviour of 3 years old children, we can predict if that child can become criminal in the future. To what extent is crime a product of human nature? Is it possible to stop children from growing to be a criminal?
Some scientists hold a belief that by observing behavior of 3 years old children , they can predict whether those children can turn into a criminal in the future or not. Personally, I believe that other extrinsic factors can exert a heavy influence on the mindset of children, and it is possible to make them adopt a sound code of behavior in their future adulthood.
It is understandable why the roots of crime may originate from human nature. It is mostly the case when these individuals used to be more aggressive and impulsive than their peers, and these seemingly innate characteristics would exacerbate when they become a fully-grown up. For example, resorting to violence to obtain what they want or stealing fruits from their peers at an early age can somehow foretell their tendency of criminality in the later years. However, in some cases, it’s due to external factors including upbringing and schooling, rather than genetic traits that lead children to the wrong path. Lots of convicts have some extent of tragedy in their childhoods, such as parental divorce and family breakdown, although they used to be a good child.
Several plausible measures should be prompted to deter children from potential crime involvement in their later life. The most effective solution is that parents should spend more quality time with their offspring and help them distinguish between benevolence and malevolence. Besides that, they can take part in parent-child interaction training program, which places parents and children in interactive situations. A therapist guides the parents, educating them on how best to respond to their child's behavior, whether positive or negative. The program in some countries has been shown to reduce hyperactivity, attention deficit, aggression, and anxious behavior in children.
In conclusion, although innate criminal tendencies is justifiable to some extent, proper education and guidance of parents could have a significant contribution to the reduction of crime in the years to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36677115987 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92628177044 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626959247649 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7112018956 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.692307692 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285138174568 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934625159994 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773530235892 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170691380205 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756463894211 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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