Should museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge, even a voluntary charge, be levied for admittance? Discuss this issue, and give your opinion.
There has always been considerable debate about the admission fee to museums and art galleries for the residents. From my sentiment, I totally agree with the idea that the admittance fee should be levied. In this essay, that idea will be discussed in details as the first part, and the reason why museum and art galleries should not charge will be explained in the second part.
On the one hand, charging the visitors may raise funds which could support to enhance services. The funding will be invested for improving facilities and developing the interactive programs or simulators which bring better experiences than static contents. For instance, Samsung museum of Art in South Korea usually refreshes interior design as well as equips cutting-edge devices in purpose of demonstration. This investment will attract residents and bring them back the museum although they could have accessed in the past.
On the other hand, if museums and art galleries are free for entrance ticket, this will help to educate society. The number of residents visiting museums and art galleries where are not really attractive places will surely increase. Consequently, there will be more people educated about history, civilizations and other necessary information. For example, the general public visit the War museum, so they will gain knowledge related to the remarkable battles and what kind of weapons used in the past.
In conclusion, the paid or free when visiting to museums and art galleries still is the topic that many people are arguing. I encourage that the entry fee should be charged on adults, but it should be free for children and teenagers who have to know about the history and culture of country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...necessary information. For example, the general public visit the War museum, so they will gain...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281967213115 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.147540983607 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0622950819672 0.0946595960268 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393442622951 0.0501214627716 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0229508196721 0.0437548338989 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118032786885 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0524590163934 0.0403226058552 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65020257624 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0196721311475 0.0326793684256 60% => OK
Particles: 0.00327868852459 0.00163938923432 200% => OK
Determiners: 0.0885245901639 0.0861772015684 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0491803278689 0.021408717616 230% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0229508196721 0.011925033212 192% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1708.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12186379928 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376344086022 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.290322580645 0.28420135186 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197132616487 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136200716846 0.137316102897 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65020257624 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 61.1050465121 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4615384615 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3664589767 49.517814964 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.384615385 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23076923077 0.814263465372 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 50.4937965261 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.15625 1.69124875643 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389781257877 0.332605444948 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0974119434067 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0575460050555 0.0668466124924 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575760702347 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121277553442 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159422225585 0.134430193775 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697846311179 0.0742795772207 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.390880540561 0.324371583561 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0116424623374 0.0638462369009 18% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272828086569 0.228012699653 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065765983343 0.058150111329 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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