In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life.
What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
You should write at least 250 words
Nowadays, the prevailing phenomenon of having children late in a family is a controversial issue. There are a number of culprits explaining why the matter is spurred. Besides that, the influences of the foreseeable trend cause severe damage both to social and family life.
On the one hand, there are a few rationales to explain why this matter has remarkably increased. First and foremost, most young people have a tendency to get a deeper joy of juvenility. In other words, they are able to stand out better opportunities to accumulate not only academic knowledge but also hands-on experience. Therefore, experiencing more things is beneficial and essential to improve themselves. Another fact is that the health condition is the most significant factor to fire the problem of having children for a longer time. In particular, the infertility of a man is a crippling disease forcing them to have children based on their desire.
Meanwhile the cited reasons are of paramount importance, the issue fiercely impacts on humans lives, especially society and family life. With regard to society, when the trend is gone, leading to the decrease of population for various aspects of people’s life, thus it finds it challenging for society to meet citizens’ demand. For example, in heavy industry, it requires a great deal of people to work for a long period of time, if the population is lowered, the industry could not develop and attain triumph in their aspects. In terms of family life, the relationship between husbands and wifes would be negatively affected in cases of not having children at the right time as they expected. As a result, the rate of divorce is likely to be enhanced, especially young families because they have to encounter impediments not only their mental health but also the criticism from their parents.
In conclusion, as a number of reasons mentioned, the prevailing trend of having children late poses a potential threat into society and family life and causes detrimental ramifications in diverse aspects of our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, in other words, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16417910448 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88865164206 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576119402985 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6799980958 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239446074787 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722698784417 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056666784504 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145736987039 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451029690773 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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