In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures can be taken to solve them?
It is true that the number of people in some countries is suffering from obesity and other health issues. This essay will evaluate the inactive lifestyles and incorrect food choices as the main causes of these problems and suggest viable solutions.
The primary contributing factors for people being overweight is the sedentary lifestyle. The inactivity of a person can lead to less burning of fats in the body resulting in an accumulated weight. For instance, the University of New South Wales conducted a survey on student’s activities, and found out that 80% of the respondents who have less physical activities were above the average normal weight. Another factor that can influence this condition is the unhealthy eating habits of the population. The presence of fast foods is prevalent in every corner of the streets, making it the ultimate choice. The excess consumption of fats and sugar that cannot be burned to energy will be deposited in the body as unwanted fats.
However, there are effective measures to address the problem. Firstly, the government can sponsor an awareness program that will raise awareness and warn the public of the potential health problems associated with obesity. This program, which includes promotion of community exercise, will help the people to create a healthy environment. Finally, individual initiative and self-determination to change their lifestyles and eating habits can result to an improved health. For example, the UK “Five Fruits Diet” implemented in some cities reduced the obesity level by 20%. This is an indication of how effective a government program can be.
In conclusion, although there are causes of obesity such as lifestyle and poor eating habits, these problems are not considered insurmountable. The government can tackle the issue by an effective awareness campaign.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2875 0.247107183377 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.13125 0.155533422707 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.015625 0.0501214627716 31% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.009375 0.0437548338989 21% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.115625 0.122226691241 95% => OK
Participles: 0.034375 0.0403226058552 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92348113964 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.01875 0.0326793684256 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.140625 0.0861772015684 163% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.034375 0.021408717616 161% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01875 0.011925033212 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1868.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.44137931034 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.441379310345 0.374742101984 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.334482758621 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.251724137931 0.203846283523 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.179310344828 0.137316102897 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92348113964 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 63.6533150466 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.125 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9782920662 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 51.5732758621 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.8 1.69124875643 166% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492851336094 0.332605444948 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0657122366667 0.102741220458 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.049729378546 0.0668466124924 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542664747937 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122492694845 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196744622651 0.134430193775 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605919625821 0.0742795772207 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.408181925663 0.324371583561 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.041437976538 0.0638462369009 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348709573117 0.228012699653 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405208765241 0.058150111329 70% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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