In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In a modern world, people tend to have a lot of leisure time. They often spend this time by eating some foods. It makes their weight increase significantly and, as a result, they have several health problem. This essay will explain the causes of this kind of problem and try to find the better solution to overcome it.
There are several reason why the weight of people is increasing and their fitness is decreasing. Firstly, common people like to eat some junk foods rather than healthy foods. For example, fried chicken, fried fries, and hamburger is a favorable dish that chosen by the people. However, there are a lot of healthy foods, like fresh fruits and salads that served in their city. Secondly, they tend to spend free time by watching television or playing a computer-based games rather than exercising to burn their calories. Finally, the internet also contribute to the decreased of people's health, because many people have spent nearly half a day just to sit in front of the computer.
To minimize or perhaps overcome this problem, there are various practices that can be done by the people. They can make a strict schedule to do some exercises. It does not need a complicated type of exercise, but they can do a simple one like walking or running around the neighborhood. Another effort that can contribute to solve this problem is by eating healthy foods. For example, people can eat some vegetables and fruits, especially the organic ones. They can buy it at the nearest market or shopping center in their town.
In conclusion, people are free to choose what kind of their life is going to be. However, the most important thing in our life is to keep fit and healthy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some health'.
Suggestion: some health
...gnificantly and, as a result, they have several health problem. This essay will explain the ca...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'game'?
Suggestion: game
... television or playing a computer-based games rather than exercising to burn their ca...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221212121212 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.172727272727 0.155533422707 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0727272727273 0.0946595960268 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0484848484848 0.0501214627716 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0515151515152 0.0437548338989 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0969696969697 0.122226691241 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0424242424242 0.0403226058552 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48306075763 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0424242424242 0.0326793684256 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0969696969697 0.0861772015684 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212121212121 0.021408717616 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0151515151515 0.011925033212 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1691.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 294.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75170068027 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350340136054 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227891156463 0.28420135186 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142857142857 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.078231292517 0.137316102897 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48306075763 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.1361492195 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3333333333 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5136419592 49.517814964 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9444444444 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 39.1224489796 49.1944974215 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.32222222222 1.69124875643 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430928182705 0.332605444948 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0790152380032 0.102741220458 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0458699124833 0.0668466124924 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.476090068404 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112588816138 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150927929803 0.134430193775 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102103476185 0.0742795772207 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294183430506 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0729576728667 0.0638462369009 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296171681765 0.228012699653 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649153593795 0.058150111329 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.