In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like. To what extent should children have to follow rules?
The extent to which the children should follow strict rules of behavior is very complex issue because the children grow up in different culture. For example in Pakistan and India, child has expected to be submissive in front of parents and adults around him. While this is not the case in western countries, mostly children follow the moto ‘thou shalt do what thou wilt’ promote by the celebrities and rock star. I believe that to follow strict rules of behavior have advantages and serious drawbacks as well which are discussed below.
Firstly, strict rules of behavior create respectful and responsible children, who turn in mature respectful adults, which form a suitable society which is free from bad trend like prostitution and drug abuse. Secondly, if a child does not follow the strict rules of behavior they may get out of hand, become work shy and indolent. This may be the burden on society and since the government find it ways to cater such ills.
However, forcing children to follow strict rules of behavior, sometimes may not yield result in advantage as discussed above, the strict rules may backfires and works against the society. Teenagers always do opposite to what they are told to do, simply because they want to be independent. The children should have rights to exercise free will and allow them to develop their own pattern of behavior. Imposing strict rules may simply destroy the individuality of a child.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01244813278 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52694710725 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597510373444 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7880749609 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.818181818 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40631197914 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145209078696 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089319837049 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27613202939 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728276728873 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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