In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.
Undoubtedly, In some nations there is huge income disparity among people. Some people are earning astronomical salaries while others even are not able to make both ends and living under poverty. I am disagree with the trend that limit must be imposed on the amount of high salaries, people are earning and i strongly support the view that this is favourable for a country.
On the one hand, Limiting amount of salaries might have detrimental impact on the society and the country as a whole. First of all, In today’s modern society everyone yearning to earn more and more money as they go for diligent studies in prestigious universities to make their career and then pass tests in order to get employed where there is great competition. However, if higher authorities would cap the salaries then people will stop working harder. As a consequent, The economy of the country would go down and people will not struggle to earn higher salaries if there is no hope and legal support.
Secondly, Youngsters may start migrating to other countries in order make their future bright government would not appreciate their efforts and rather put a limit on amount of salaries as in fully progressed nations they would get better employment opportunities and with great hard work they would meet their desires and get success. Hence, In order to develop a country there must be collaboration among administration and its citizens so moving outside can hinder the progress of a nation.
Finally, The development of a a nation could be hindered by limiting the amount of salaries as authorities charge high income tax from richer people snd use that amount to establish infrastructure and provide public services. Therefore, people with limited salaries would pay less taxes.
On the other hand, I am advocate of the approach that it is a good for nation. First of all, unlike the phenomenon of liming amount of salaries, Income disparity would encourage people to work harder as poor people would make efforts to compete with rich ones in order to earn salaries like they are earning. As a result, Economy would boost if citizens are contributing the progress of the nation.
In addition to this, For the overall development and fairness in the country that only able natives are getting rewards as the people who are working hardest are earning more and vice versa. Consequently, The country will grow when fair rewards are being provided by the government.
Last but not least, Risks are taken by those who want to be successful in their life so differences in salaries keep them going to take risks that would be success in a real sense.
To conclude, Although it is thought by some people that government should limit the huge salaries yet i believe that a country might grow if there is disparity as poor ones would burn mid night oil to get success as richer ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2392.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 488.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90163934426 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61489220561 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475409836066 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0927028497 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.888888889 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05555555556 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36602048477 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126443992669 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793237330758 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181292508479 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876619017808 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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