In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What are some effects?
There are several reasons why adolescents are involved in more crime. One of the main reasons comes from their family background. When some juveniles have to constantly witness domestic violence and be influence by negative role models from their parents, they will learn from the behavior of parent and use violence against others. Another important factor contributing to this phenomenon is that the media plays enormous role in shaping children’s criminality. It is very common now for juveniles to be exposed to many sexual abuse or violent scenes on TV and internet, such as gangs, gun crimes and murder. As a result, they tend to involved in illegal activities real life.
There are some enormous effects by the increasing of the crime rate. Firstly, juvenile delinquency may lose their freedom while being rehabilitation center or placed on probation, they also will not be gone to school. In addition, in residential detention centers for adolescents they can connect with other juvenile offender, who may be more sophisticated or influential. This makes recidivism likely. Secondly, juvenile offenders also leave the consequences for their families. The family has to face the ethical issues of responsibility to the victims of the child’s crime. Families must usually attend group-counseling sessions, which can be disruptive and costly during the time when the child is in detention or on probation.
In conclusion, there are many reasons to explain why today antisocial behavior among the youth has reached a historically unprecedented high and leaving enormous consequence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'reasons'' or 'reason's'?
Suggestion: reasons'; reason's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44758064516 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07095831779 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637096774194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2287116039 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0797879213145 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323946674883 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496667408121 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568058329982 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00629492268959 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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