In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, In a modern phase of life, it's a trend to eat junk food instead of healthy food. As a result, Many countries, people who are suffering from health issues has been growing rapidly. To protect people it is obvious for The Government to put a heavy tax on fast food. I disagree with this phenomenon.
To begin with, It is true that a plethora of people who are addicted to the junk food and street cuisines.The Government should impose a higher taxes because health issues are growing higher as the day passed. Specially youngsters have a bad habit to eat these kind of food. To put a higher tax on junk food many people are stop consuming these types of food because numerous people who cannot afford the high prices of food and as a result they have to stop eating fast food. Also, A ratio of people who are suffering from health issues has been significantly slow down. It is one of the noticeable solution to stop people to eat a junk food.
However, I believe that it is not necessary for The Government to put a heavy tax on fast food because it's not a perfect solution to decreasing a people who are suffering from health issues. All the age group of people who likes to eat a fast food and not all the time junk food is an issue to health problem. Specially Youngsters and children are loved too much to eat these kind of food and they are enjoying it. The Government should think once time for people when they impose higher taxes on food because poor human are life are depends on the type of food.
Moreover, if The Government puts high taxes on food than all the people are not stopping to eat food and they are eat as much as they can. In these Global World everyone is addicted to junk food. Let's take an example, if a girl wants to eat junk food and her parents are not able to purchase these kind of food due to higher taxes on it. At the end a girl insists her parents to take food and they take a food anyhow for their daughter. The Government held the seminar depend on health and junk food and how junk food is bad for health. Also it is human Onus taking care of their health and stop to eat junk food.
In the conclusion, from all aforementioned points, I hold my view that it is not a perfect solution to stop people to eating a junk food. The Government Should try some better ideas to keeping in mind that people are addicted to the junk food.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, as to, kind of, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 450.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30666666667 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27787642063 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.366666666667 0.561755894193 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.751373844 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432333955252 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169929654387 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527442596169 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299447413298 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729241581051 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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