In some countries, many children are unhappy. What are the reasons? What can parents and schools do to solve this problem?
It is no doubt that there is an increasing number of children are getting more depressed with their life. This essay will pinpoint some reasons that might affect children ‘s sense of happiness and suggest several remedies for this phenomenon.
Youngsters are becoming upset because of paternal care as well as school programs . One of the first cause is the over – protection of parents keeping children wrapped in cotton wool to keep them “safe” and thus denying several opportunities to experience the real tough life . Human social skills and physical coordination are simply developed through talking, listening, running or jumping.. Without playing and communicating, children’s creativity and interpersonal skills is likely to be stunted . Another major reason is the massive burden that children have to face at school. The parents’ obsession of achievements such as tests, targets, competitions leads to a winner and losers culture where they put a lot of pressure on their children.
Potential ways to tackle this problem may include these following solutions Firstly, parents are the ones who should aware of that their children need to play in a relaxed , unstructured way. They prefer to play outdoors with other friends than being alone or staying at home watching TV. Secondly, changing the tests and targets system of school is a impossible way to reduce the pressure on youngsters ‘s shoulders.
In conclusion, the importance of family caring and the proper school curriculum are the reasons of affecting the well being of children. Hence, they should talk and listening seriously what children are telling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42248062016 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93956818716 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670542635659 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2406959367 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218982860441 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070966395856 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05215652302 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133817157077 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365988442607 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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