In some countries more and more people are buying imported food rather than buying food produced locally Why do people buy imported food What can be done to encourage people to buy locally produced food

Essay topics:

In some countries, more and more people are buying imported food rather than buying food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What can be done to encourage people to buy locally produced food.

In some nations, there are an increase tendency in purchasing food which was imported from foreign countries compared domestic food. This essay will discuss some reasons for this choice and propose some solutions to enhance people to buy locally manufactured food.

To begin with, there are some causes why people choose to buy imported food. First and foremost, it is believed that imported food from foreign countries have better qualities compared domestic one. For instance, fruit such as apple which derived from American or New Zealand was preferred than one planted in local area. Secondly, imported products have famous brand so people have truth on spending these foods. The fact indicates that customers tent to buy well-known food even with high price provided that they have large quantities. Moreover, imported food provide a variety of choices for people to decide to buy products which are good for them.

There are some measures to raise the local food consumption. The first way is that the government should focus on investing the qualities of domestic food. The policies about verifying both the roof and qualities of products should be implemented to improve the truth of customers. Due to the fact that more high standard products have, the more revenues these goods raise. Other solution is to raise awareness of customers to use local products to increase the profit of nation's economy. In addition, more strict policies and laws should be enacted, thus local food can compete against imported product.

In conclusion, more and more people decide to purchase imported food because of being better quality and diversity of products. Some solutions about price and quantities of local food should carried out to increase the sales of domestic food.

Votes
Average: 9 (10 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tendencies'?
Suggestion: tendencies
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22027972028 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43797576989 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524475524476 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.3130769149 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445556641588 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161729460014 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1101124666 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29718505313 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602680434046 0.056905535591 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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