In some countries the population is ageing and the birth rate is declining. How will this affect society and how can it be prevented? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
There is evidence that in some spots the birth rate is getting low which leading to ageing population. Although this issue may impact on society in various levels, the government could shoulder the responsibility to care such problem.
To begin with, lower birth rate causes the elder society. So, the numbers of youngsters who are personally fearless, impetuous, creative and productive will be reduced. That is to say, the part of society who could have the potential to generate positive changes in economic might be fade away. A good example of this fact is the Facebook young founder Mark Zuckerberg who develop this startup in 2004 which work as the catalyst for the global economy by creating new jobs.
Moreover, the reasons of lower birthrate should be recognized by their priority. predominantly, the main explanation for such problem is economical reason. To be more exact, some parents do not desire to have child as they think it invests a lot of time and attention and beyond that it is expensive. For instance, from the clothes and food to school and college tuition fees it costs a lot of money which is the main concern of parenting in modern world. To deal with such issue, as the government access to the related data and have the complete power they should identify the causes and come up with the practical solutions such as: tax deductions, paid maternity leave and financial support.
In conclusion, government should be tackled to falling in birth rate consciously by supporting the parents who do not have children due to its rasing cost as it prevents the elder society which is the serious problem in some countries and has long term detrimental effect on economic.
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Suggestion: Predominantly
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Suggestion: termed
... problem in some countries and has long term detrimental effect on economic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93031358885 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64142294546 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592334494774 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3477963017 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192195789801 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669175869408 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044541104384 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122306122943 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377162553085 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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