Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school than secondary school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Learning a new language is now becoming more and more essential to a people in a globalization era. Some people believe the sooner the kid starts learning a foreign language the better the future development of the kid. While some think the kid should learn at least when they are 10. So what is the benefits and drawbacks of this idea?
Firstly, let's look at the upside when parent let they children learning a new language since elementary. Scientists have confirmed that when we are young, our human brains are very easily taking new things and memorizing it for a long time. So to a non-native language, the kid would learn it rapidly and soon using it as a native one. Addition, mastered a language a young age gives the kid more source of knowledge as too as time to study anything else. Finally, from learning a foreign language, kids also acknowledge a new culture, viewpoints and lifestyles of a country which would affect positively to them in future when the people becoming more international citizens.
On the other hand, starting at primary school might bring some downsides for the kids. Not only a child need mentally development at their young age but also physically growth. Learning how to write, speak and do math at school is suitable for them to have free time doing physical exercise and rest. Furthermore, it's depended on the kid that if he/she wants to learn a foreign language or not. Some kids might don't like and that's mean we are putting pressure on them.
In conclusion, start teaching kids a new language when they are still in elementary school have its own advantage and disadvantages, But to consider weighing two I would choose the latter because I believe the child has the right to learn what
they want and school programmes shouldn't put too heavy load of knowledge at early age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, still, while, as to, at least, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75394321767 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6016077157 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555205047319 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8635886663 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272089726053 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925703242032 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670391429552 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152955972737 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624903720513 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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