Some hold the view that ideas and information should be completely open, and there should be no controls on what people can read and watch in the media (TV, newspaper, Internet). Do you agree with this view, or do you think that in some circumstances governments should limit the freedom of media?
In this modern era, it is easy for people to update news through mass media. Some say that thinkings and tidings should be allowed to surf and watch in freedom. There is also an argument that it needs to be managed by the government. In this essay, I would examine the roots of the matter and offer some statements of mine.
We are living in the 21st century which is considered as the time of digital technology. People have the desire to receive information from every corner of the world. Thanks to the mass media, people can know what is happening in the other countries, just with their phones, televisions or newspapers. By this way, instead of taking a week in the library to find out information in documents and books, students can complete their studies quickly and effectively with 0.1-second surfing on the Internet.
However, the drawback of this issue is that some people with evil purposes find information for their terrorist acts or look for accomplices. Recently, government information hacker has appeared and has become serious. It might not be difficult for the investigative teams to find out the clues of the cases, or look for pieces of messages containing plots of offenders.
Dealing with the high number of murder, kidnap, assault, drug dealing…, especially is cybercrime, a solution is for the government to censor the information sought by network users to maximize global security. But keeping user privacy secure should also be one of the top priorities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.972 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74087577245 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5817577296 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6153846154 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253431871336 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823787569714 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541086569315 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140687658587 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488654350483 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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