Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Number of people think it is better to believe a bad situation which could be either unsatisfactory work or dearth of money.Opponents ,on the other hand, demonstrate that it is good to try and developed such situation.This essay will discuss these two views in term of difficult circumstance or strived to the best.
On the one hand of this issue ,difficult circumstance could lead to satisfied the bad situation.This mean ,some people acceptance of this fact will make them feel more satisfied with their live because they could be unable to drastically change their situation and also could be lack of the jobs. For example ,the government in the North Korea give all the national in various jobs same salaries 400$ and they do not have other chance to earn the money if the people from North Korea refused their work , they will probably be poor and face a difficult life .As a result of this ,the people who are poor or have difficult circumstance will satisfied the fact to gain the money.
On the other hand ,strived could help to improve the situation.To clear this ,some people have time to look for a better job and a higher salary since they are ambition and want to achieve their jobs .For instance , although the most story about the successful businessman’s as Warren Buffett and Henry Ford they were suffer from a lot of failure and frustration ,they tried and improved to reach the path of success.Therefore ,it is necessary to try to improvement the bad situation in order to find the bast job.
To summarize ,it not might be possible to cover all the aspect of this issue.However, this essay focus only on difficult circumstance and strived to the best .The most important point that have been mentioned are some people could adapt the bad situation to feels satisfaction and other people would try to pass the bad situation .Finally ,it can be said that the decision take about the bad situation would depend to the circumstance and inspiration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86135693215 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81220509902 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525073746313 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1254473672 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 329.6 106.682146367 309% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.8 20.7667163134 326% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.2 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280838391953 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163597140591 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793396178481 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190508322056 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675817168184 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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