Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious polution and uses up the world's fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that air travel is a breakthrough of modern transportation. Due to its speed and convenience, aviation is becoming the first choice of many people. While many people claim that air transport should be limited because of its massive emissions of carbon dioxide and high fuel consumption, i personally think that the benefits it brings overcome its drawbacks.
Although air travel does produce green-house gases and is fuel-consuming, the main source of the world's emission is private cars. Moreover, alternative energy sources are being explored and experimented. Many people choose air travel over cars, resulting in an increase in the demand for better, faster and more eco-friendly planes. It is imaginable that aeroplanes would be powered by cleaner energy, so it is unfair to blame air travel for causing polution and restrict it.
Furthermore, aviation plays an important part on the growth of world economy. The most obvious benefit of travelling by air is its speed, which means geographical limitations are not a problem anymore. For instant, a cargo from America could be sent to Vietnam within four working days that is much faster than using traditional shipping method. Additionally, air travel is time-saving and convienient. Instead of spending all day on train, people could sit back and relax and their flight reach the desired destination in no time. People are saving a large amount of money thanks to cheap flight company, which gives almost everyone a chance to take advantages of the most modern way of travel.
In conclution, I believe in the booming growth of aviation and think that it should be invested in and developed even more in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... fuel-consuming, the main source of the worlds emission is private cars. Moreover, alt...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to air'
Suggestion: to air
...ed and experimented. Many people choose air travel over cars, resulting in an incre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17090909091 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88982255167 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0564015623 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237162275077 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749124393549 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455718211771 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134218616578 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402526054281 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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