Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes, and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions on matters affecting them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are mixed regarding whether or not children should be given the freedom of choices on daily issues as some people claim that they could grow up into selfish individuals. Personally, I am strongly of the opinion that it is necessary for children to have the liberty to make their own decisions.
Many support the view that when children have a total freedom to decide every aspects of their lives, they may fail to consider the feelings of the others. For instance, a child may insist that he could watch cartoon whenever he wants without caring about what other family members want to watch on TV. If his parents allow him to behave the same, he will definitely develop into a egotistic person. Therefore, it is essential for parents to set the limits of the freedom their children can have.
On the other hand, children who have been allowed to make their own choices will eventually develop a keen sense of responsibility. This can be best seen in the contrasting example of protective parents and permissive parents. Protective parents tend to smother their children with dictation and make the majority of their decisions for them. Over time, these kids will likely to become dependent on their parents. Later in life, these kids would not have developed any of practical skills due to their parents’ overprotective behaviours. On the contrary, with the permissive parenting style, children will need to consider a number of factors carefully and it will make them more responsible when it comes to issues that they would confront.
In conclusion, I believe that even though children should have the right to decide their own lives, parents ought to teach them to respect the feelings of others; otherwise, they may end up becoming self-centered.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
Opinions are mixed regarding whether or not children should be given the freedom of...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'total freedom'.
Suggestion: total freedom
...upport the view that when children have a total freedom to decide every aspects of their lives,...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e same, he will definitely develop into a egotistic person. Therefore, it is esse...
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Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the freedom their children can have. On the other hand, children who have bee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98983050847 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65188761075 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6494244404 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229976563976 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872245562064 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661607490094 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140539097631 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376686627576 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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