Some people believe that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In this day and age, the myriad number of road accidents are such a heated issue that frequently generates a huge number of dilemmas. Some people hold the view that exceeding the lowest limit of legal age to begin driving is the optimum option in order to upgrade road safety while the rest of them disagree over the popular belief and say if other solutions are relevant in alleviating road accidents. Both sides of the argument will be clarified with possible examples before a reasoned conclusion is decided upon.
On the one hand, it is generally believed that one of the common reasons for several fatalities in the road is beginning to drive at an early age. To clarify, distracted driving like calling while driving etc, drunk driving and speeding are being oftenly observed by youngsters who do not possess the ample experience to operate cars. By raising the license given period to novice drivers, road accidents will witness the shrinkage in the increasing number. Due to the fact that within the prolonged time, they can learn driving skills fully.
On the other hand, some are of the opinion that aforementioned solution can not drop the growing rate in mortality by accidents. In the light of the fact that a beginner can hone his/ her skill in a short time if they want assiduously. So the most effective way to provoke the reduction in accidents is to educate apprentices to drive accurately and curb their skill while driving among public and community cars. Another solution would be paying attention to road itself. In clarity, enhancing run-down infrastructure, installing more traffic lights and signs which aid to drive carefully may deter them from being assassin of sinless sacrifices in road.
Minor disagreements to the former solution will never prevent me from concluding that l totally concur with the opinion that raising legal age is the ideal way with the aim of lessening road accidents much as it would be better if it is implemented with other denouements mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95562130178 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63871657841 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58875739645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2425138963 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.846153846 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224608875345 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669928923124 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530585962336 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125835646294 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492289132403 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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