Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them.
In what ways are computers a hindrance ?
What is your opinion?
Today's computers have changed the lives of people of all ages. No one can deny that it becomes an inseparable part of our life. Nevertheless, some people disagree with that.
We must acknowledge that computers make our life easy. In XX century, people use computers both learning, entertainment and even for talking and becoming a good mixer.
However, it is hard to compete with its negative effects. It is very obvious to see that it has bad effects on our health. Because of emission of radiation, sitting in front of computer monitor too much can make us sick.
In addition, it is an indisputable fact that it makes us lazy. While people use more than one day to calculate some calculations in old times, it needs only a few seconds right now.
Also the development of computer technology exposure some criminal activities. Cyber crimes are well known around all over the world and today's software engineers are trying to find protective ways to deal with it.
In conclusion, I have more trust in a profitable beneficence of computers than negative . Important point is to learn how to use it correctly.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235849056604 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.150943396226 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0990566037736 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0471698113208 0.0501214627716 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0801886792453 0.0437548338989 183% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.13679245283 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0283018867925 0.0403226058552 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78676694559 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0330188679245 0.0326793684256 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0754716981132 0.0861772015684 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0141509433962 0.021408717616 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00471698113208 0.011925033212 40% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1118.0 1933.35771543 58% => OK
No of words: 191.0 316.048096192 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85340314136 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20517956788 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30890052356 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251308900524 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193717277487 0.203846283523 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125654450262 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78676694559 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.037074148 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664921465969 0.56093040696 119% => OK
Word variations: 70.1927506127 60.7387585426 116% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.6428571429 20.7743622355 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9879980883 49.517814964 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8571428571 127.492653851 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6428571429 20.7743622355 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 38.7737471952 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.4406779661 1.69124875643 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229256234338 0.332605444948 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0611150206107 0.102741220458 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0645548772918 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575784984593 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112653020703 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860321621048 0.134430193775 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437580535904 0.0742795772207 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.117664193976 0.324371583561 36% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0558785440876 0.0638462369009 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127256971835 0.228012699653 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247097210356 0.058150111329 42% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.