It is argued that, the crime rates soaring beyond the limits in the twenty first century. Some people feel that long punishments will deter people from ding crime, while other think there are alternative ways to decrease crime rates. This essay discuss both arguments before draw a conclusion.
TO begin with, the people who say crime rates can be reduced with long term punishments put forward some reason to clarify their argument. First of all, they claim that small term punishments will not deter people from engaging criminal activities in future. For example, in Saudi Arabia crime rates are lesser than other democratic countries. Experts say that, the length and severity of punishment here decreased crime rates. Another important point is that, the punished criminals soon come out after finishing their punishment periods and engage in criminal activities. For example, a murder in our place recently happend because of a criminal who had been just released from jail after serving his term. Thus , they argue that the length of punishment should be increased so that the crime rates come down.
However people who support the former view also have some relevant causes to justify their stand. Firstly, they argue that to do crime or mistakes is human , so the law and order should give the culprit a chance for remorse. For instance, many cold blooded criminals have changed their mind after a short term punishment. Nobody have the right to punish somebody in the darkness of jail forever. The second point they raises is, the culprits too have a family and children their life will be miserable after he/ she jailed for a long term. They suggest some alternative solutions to curb the crime rates. First one is , rehabilitation programs for culprits who have finished their punishment period. Criminologists say that most released people again attracted to crimes because do no have any thing to do. If the government take initiative to open rehabilitation center, the crime rates can be cut down considerably. Another proposal from their side is to government should support financially to start small scale business.
Having checked both sides I too agree with the former view point as it is more practical humanitarian . Therefore, governments should necessary steps to help the released culprits from jail in order to lead a peaceful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11398963731 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55871742197 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556994818653 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8617665908 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269970953283 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783346971607 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842603629607 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166035942306 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107730501949 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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