The reports regarding crimes constantly showed in television and internet, even some lived with detailed criminal conduct, such as mutilated body and the weapon that resulted in the tragedies, which causes enormous uncomfortable on audiences. Therefore, some people suggest that the media should restrict the report of certain detailed criminal scene. The essay total support this suggestion.
To begin with, the elaborated criminal report may impact teenages and thus, induce them to mimic the crime. The scene of crime are frequently implete with blood and body, which may invoke mania in adolescents who never see them before. The unexpected impression probably results in a mimic of young people who cannot distinguish right and wrong. Thus, numerous parents insist that children must not be exposed to extreme violence. As a matter of fact, multiple countries rated their movies according to the appropriate exposure to children, like the USA and Australia.
Furthermore, the details of a crime are not the concern to the public. The public merely demand that the criminers are tried and justice of the law and society fufilled. Actually, details of a transgression are the evidences to convict the suspect and should only confidential to the related specialists and officers. When the television station reports a crime, it is better to confine the report on the brief introduction of the case and a simple eviction of it, whis is all the audiences need to know, but not the detailed scene from the crime.
To recapitulate, this essay utterly aggre with the claim that audiences only want to know the compacted version of a crime from the television or internet. The detailed crime may engender misleading information to children. Besides, the details of a crime should limit to the specilists concerned.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, furthermore, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, even so, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26804123711 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77989244149 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8851730636 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175289211973 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608050704497 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058529237263 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110872044086 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511203968026 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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