Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that for a hobby to be exciting, it needs to have some sort of challenges. Meanwhile, others think this criterion is unnecessary. In my opinion, I partly agree with the second idea.
On the one hand, there are several existing easy activities still filling with much excitement. Take watching movies as an example, a great number of people could find it enjoyable, yet there is no sort of difficulties about it. We can watch anywhere and anytime as long as we feel comfortable. Second, the easiness of it is one of the factors define it as a common favourite hobby in modern-day life. Furthermore, not many people prefer to engage in difficult activities since they only do them because of the need to find an escape daily heavy workload. They also agree that a routine considered to be fun only when it could awake their passion and, even better if no large amount of effort is needed.
However, completing a more challenging activity could result in greater level joyfulness to performers. It dues to the fact that the harder a task is, the sweeter victory someone could taste. For example, working out frequently is no simple task for newcomers, yet if people are willing to stick to the plan and finally achieve their goals, its result would be extremely worthwhile more than anything they have experienced. It creates more sense of achievement filled with even more excitement.
In conclusion, I personally believe that a joyful activity depends on no level of difficulty but the personality of each individual. However, a harder activity might be able to create more long-term excitement for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97090909091 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7725549872 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1596673544 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207129512264 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607026335162 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908927821043 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13551714519 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090471766047 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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