Some people believe that hobbies should be challenging to be enjoyable. What are the advantages and disadvantages of maintaining a challenging pastime?
Challenging hobbies like extreme sports or playing with complex puzzles interest people since they are rewarding and unusual. While that's true, those kinds of pastimes carry two faces. People can achieve high self-esteem and experience new things; however, they might get both mental and physical damage and feel reluctant to go back to their daily life.
When people do something difficult and gain success after a struggle, they feel confidence. Unlike daily routines, which are full of problems and failure people cannot deal with, there is a possibility of great success which is truly achievable only by people's efforts when doing a hobby. It might lead to sense of refreshment and help people to believe they are competent enough. Further to that, challenging hobbies provide new experiences encouraging people to escape from the real world. When thinking about the case of rock climbing as an example, people inevitably face a totally different environment from their boring and small office. There is no doubt it cannot only expand their mind but give satisfaction.
However, the same dispositions of challenging pastimes may work in negative ways in many cases. Though they are rewarding, it gives confidence only when people achieve success. Since they are challenging, there is a much higher possibility of failure, actually; continual failure might deteriorate the negative feelings such as depression and anguish from a normal life. Also, high risk of failure can be a more serious problem when it comes to severe injuries. Many people who enjoy extreme sports become disabled or even lose their lives every year. If the damage is not as severe as such cases, extreme hobbies may make people fatigued hindering them to relieve stress. Also they may make people reluctant to go back to their everyday lives. A higher level of excitement and stimulation from their uniqueness will overwhelm a main part of life: working.
IN conclusion, enjoying challenging hobbies has several advantages; people can get self-esteem and experience which are far from their routines. Despite these benefits, there are disadvantages of them such as damage and rejection to return to normal days. It should be remembered that those problems can be serious and sometimes weaken the benefits of challenging hobbies.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'in many cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237163814181 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.161369193154 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112469437653 0.0946595960268 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0586797066015 0.0501214627716 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0513447432763 0.0437548338989 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0904645476773 0.122226691241 74% => OK
Participles: 0.041564792176 0.0403226058552 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.680685518 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0293398533007 0.0326793684256 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0562347188264 0.0861772015684 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0342298288509 0.021408717616 160% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0220048899756 0.011925033212 185% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2312.0 1933.35771543 120% => OK
No of words: 368.0 316.048096192 116% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28260869565 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.404891304348 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29347826087 0.28420135186 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201086956522 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135869565217 0.137316102897 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.680685518 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.037074148 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567934782609 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 64.6068154846 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0178905254 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 47.747826087 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.36036036036 1.69124875643 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370940365797 0.332605444948 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0635972149856 0.102741220458 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0545457244321 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.422049262169 0.534860350844 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11429951743 0.148594505496 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121114277512 0.134430193775 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830294220627 0.0742795772207 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.332462657659 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0462933974885 0.0638462369009 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266642824669 0.228012699653 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874017724075 0.058150111329 150% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.