Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, there is a widespread belief that sharing information among the people who work in the domain of the business, academic and science is essential, since the idea of distributing wide range of information is likely assist them to prevent some issues, which in turn, may contribute individuals' standard of living. However, it needs to take into account, not all information ought to be shared because it is highly likely that it may implicate some downsides that will lead to some unavoidable problems. The arguments in support of sharing information are multifaceted, yet there are also factors that it is worth to keep them under secret. In this essay, I will touch upon each of them.
There are multifarious reasons, why individuals prefer particular information ought to be opened to the public, First and foremost, by sharing out some important information to people working in the field of business, they will be able to tackle problems such as, price and quality. For instance, they are able to improve and create wide range of commodities by using various techniques, which in turn help them to reduce their expanses on these products. Therefore, people will be able to purchase not only quality goods but also for reasonable price.
Likewise, it is worth to mention, sharing information might have great impact on improving the lives of people providing that solely right kind of information is used. People who suffered from serious diseases might be a good example to support my idea. By distributing this information to a vast amount of sources, will be beneficial, as by preventing these diseases by virtue of a large public, they will be able to stop wide spreading these diseases into other countries. However, it does not mean that all information should be given to public freely.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05016722408 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79196715452 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.385407518 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.272727273 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274947727088 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106037595723 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595976046714 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193918434618 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214178194628 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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