Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Having access to scientific research is a controversial subject in today’s world. Although there is an argument whether freely access is acceptable or not, I personally belive that science ought to equally spread.
Being a professional scientist require infinite effort. Indeed, there are some scholars who devote everything but their field of research. Therefore, sharing their knowledge freely is kind of irrational and ethically wrong. Forexample, imagine some PHD students just using really high quality papers and at last they do not mention any of them on their refrences; so, all the efforts behind that paper are somehow ignored. To be more exact, it likes ordinary people take advanteges of scientists. Additionally, in some other cases, sharing informations is harmful not only for country policy but also for humanbeings, such as informations about military weapons which could lead to war occurrence.
Science should be easily accessible for everyone despite their living spot. Actually, there is not a line between learning and being wealth; so, availability of scientific data should be a big concern. For instance, in some region of Iran, although young folks do not live in good conditions, they are intelligent enough that they easily attend to high ranking universites to follow their favourable subjects. In case they have right to access adequate informations, they will follow their dreams.
In conclusion, sharing informations is one of the concerns of humanity. Some people think that free access to all fields is their right, while other believe differently. In my view, by technology developments accessing to such informations become easier than past so everyone should have the right to face the beauty of justice.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41758241758 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90310083737 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652014652015 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.120477075 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208212643424 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687624534323 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508927588629 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120612898999 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644913615968 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.