Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, there are vigorous debates about whether e-books or other online materials should be used to replace the traditional physical books for children’s reading. Both views have their advantages and disadvantages.
One of the reasons why people advocate online learning materials is because it is more environmental-friendly. When we have finished reading a book, we just need to close the file for an e-book, whereas we need to drop a book physically into the rubbish bin for a physical book. Furthermore, e-books allow people to save spaces, as they do not need to find places to keep piles and piles of books anymore.
On the other hand, many people prefer physical books to virtual books due to the likelihood of addiction associated with electric devices. Many electric devices, such as mobile phones, iPads, and tablets, contain also electronic games that are very attractive to children. Therefore, besides reading, children may addict to those other games which may result in them holding the devices for the whole day and feeling a loss of interest in other activities. This, in turn, will cause the elimination of personal interaction which is considered to be critical for the development of social skills, especially in the early stage of childhood. Moreover, it is generally known that children’s eyes will be badly affected after seeing the screen of an electric device for a long time, and this adverse effect is unfortunately irreversible.
To conclude, there is pros and cons for each of the view. I support the view of printed materials as I believe that the downsides of reading ebooks outweigh its upsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1375464684 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94603039575 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7246438538 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227422221601 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823884042448 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710579375038 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157616045067 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726816656683 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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