Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Whether professionals should be forced to contribute to the nation where they were trained or should be allowed to work in other places that they wish to is a controversial issue. There are valid arguments on both sides, which I will discuss now.
On the one hand, it is believed that these professionals received the knowledge of the country where they did their learning, therefore, they should use these knowledge to contribute to the country in return.
On the other hand, there are also various arguments on the opposite side. Firstly, professionals have paid a large amount of fee for their training. For example, a course of MBA in England required almost 40000 dollar a year. For that reason, these experts have the right to execute anything they want with their knowledge, including working for another nation. Secondly, it is believed that professionals should be the means to share knowledge from country to country. Professionals can train and learn the knowledge from numerous countries and bring them back to help their homeland or other nations in need, thus facilitate the development of the entire world. Finally, banning experts from working for other nations besides where they were trained is against the human right. To clarify, many well-known organizations such as the UN have enforced a law that allow doctors and engineers to work in any nations that they wish to, and any countries that violate this rule will get punishments.
In conclusion, although it is reasonable to work at where these experts were trained, I believe that knowledge should be a shareable resource and experts should be allowed to contribute to the whole world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'these knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; these knowledges
...ir learning, therefore, they should use these knowledge to contribute to the country in return....
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...of MBA in England required almost 40000 dollar a year. For that reason, these experts ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09124087591 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73686858977 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518248175182 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7956253206 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498317975708 0.244688304435 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166047745794 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121686567288 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324684269807 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593677534634 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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