Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.
Nowadays, the sport has become one of the most popular activities around the world. Some people think that it takes an important role in society whereas others think that it's just for entertainment purposes. In my view, sport plays an essential role in life young people and even adults.
There is no doubt that sports activities have developed so much compared to the past. The government encourages people to do these activities. Firstly, I think that it is a business for each country and it can bring a lot of money for both the people and the government. Secondly, it helps people to improve their skills such as strength, endurance and flexibility. Generally, it helps to keep fit. Thirdly, any sports activities can improve your immunity system and you will avoid healthily problems.
However, others think that sport is a leisure activity. Sometimes people waste their free time doing this activity. For example, I saw a lot of people who came to a gym just for fun purposes. They usually spend most part of the time speaking with their friends. Thus they won't reach a result in body construction. I am sure that sometimes sport is a leisure activity. For example, if you play tennis or football with your friends. It is just for relaxing, but if a person wants to reach some achievement it will be more than a leisure activity for him and takes an important role in his life and even in society.
Overall, although some people think that sport is a leisure activity, I still think that sport plays an important role in the society because it has brought advantages to people in terms of health and social areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...f the time speaking with their friends. Thus they wont reach a result in body constr...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, for example, i think, no doubt, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75971731449 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56738524436 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526501766784 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6397595778 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445070556173 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119405086437 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104678320788 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292998262309 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762584891254 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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